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Emptily enough she seems afraid.
Last seen in Camden town,
leaving nothing but the photograph they used.
It was a clue, a plea for help, "come find me",
a decision to be different from the others,
the usual, the drug addict from Brixton that did so well in school,
(who smiles laughably unaware, a picture of life.)
Missing. Probably dead- invisible lemon juice words.
Assumed, presumed, sad but true.
Have you seen Milly?

At 77 she knew the fate of her picture;
obligingly vulnerable, playing a concerto on the heartstrings.
It stares unblinkingly from shop windows and tube stations,
becomes an uncomfortable piece of reading material on the commute,
a mildly unsettling city statistic for the tourists.
"Oh, but don't worry, it didn't ruin our day, our trip.
We rode a bus, the eye, saw that great big clock.
Missing, 77, from Camden town. We soon forgot."
©2007-2010 *cheramyn
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Author's Comments

I actually can't sleep because I can't get this poor woman's face out of my head. I haven't really got all I want to say in this but it's all I can manage at the moment.

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:iconcermegara:
Beautiful, poignant. Thank you.

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~M
:icontwilightlavender:
Wow...
This is kind of terrifying, almost. Lovely imagery.
:iconhiddenregret:
That last line...as someone has said...is very poignant.

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Have your eyes shared a kiss with the sun?
:iconcheramyn:
thankyou so much :)

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:iconcheramyn:
thankyou, I'm glad you liked :D

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:iconmaetoile:
Gosh this is unbelievably emotive and frequently disturbing. I love it. x

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What oft was thought but ne'er so well expressed...
:iconcheramyn:
thankyou so much :)

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"Here's looking at you kid"

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:iconcryingpain:
Aww thats sad :(
But well written :)

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:frail:Every artist was first an amateur - 'Ralph Waldo Emerson':frail:
:iconbunnyfugger:
Unrelenting sadness, well written, good flow

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"No time for the old in and out; I've just come to read your meter"

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